Mary Robinette Kowal recently described an interesting storytelling phenomenon that happened to her.
She read one of her unfinished stories to a group of people she knew. She got to the place where the story ended (without ending) and the audience wanted to know ...
But what happens next?!?!"I glanced at all the sharp instruments they had in their hands, decided that my life was in danger, and told them the rest of the story. My word-smithery went out the window pretty fast leaving me with voice to convey mood and then... the rest was all about the plot. What happened next.
I knew basically what I wanted to have happen, but I hadn't worked out any of the details yet. Having a live audience listening to me as I found my way through the rest of the plot points showed me exactly which things were interesting and which weren't. (The car chase is right out.) If they had a question, I could stop for exposition, (See, the Faerie Queen knew there was a traitor, she just didn't know who) while making a mental note that I needed to plant that piece of information earlier when actually writing it.
When I got out of there, I sat down with the keyboard and the words fairly flew out of me. I still have a couple of thousand words to go, but I know exactly what happens next.
Interesting idea for writers -- try telling the unfinished part of your story and see how the telling affects your writing.















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